Shrine of the Fox (Revisited)

Getting back into drawing after a hiatus, I decided to warm up by attempting a redraw of an earlier picture: .  I really liked the concept behind the original, but the actual finished product was less than ideal.  I'm going to update this one with a background at some point, probably a story as well. 

The basic concept was that Hotaru, a city girl sent to take care of an old shrine in the countryside.  It doesn't take her long to get bored, but soon finds herself stuck in the middle of a Spirited Away/Neverending Story like scenario, taking on the role of a fox spirit.