Pearl Dive 1

Greetings there again! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Good Points:

- I like the oceanic background and I like how you emphasize how the character seems to be swimming in a deep part of an ocean with the dark blue. (Though, there are some light blue to show that whole background is not some screen. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>)

- I like the shines you added on the swimsuit. Makes it slick and shiny, you know. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Improvements/Suggestions:

- I noticed that the fingers are too close together. In real life, fingers are more spread apart. (Thus, making fingers more useful and expressive.) I don't which hand tutorial would work for you so I'm gonna give you a VERY long link to a library full of hand tutorial. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
www.google.com/search?q=hand+t…:
Yeah, I know. It's very long. It's best to have a variety of tutorials at your disposal. That way, you would have a lot of tips and tricks to draw hands. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

- Hmm, the hair seems shaggy and is not like real hair. (It almost resembles a porcupine. XD) To save me the trouble of clogging this place, with a long link, here's a single hair tutorial: gold-seven.deviantart.com/art/…

Hope this helps! ^_^